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#WritersBlock got this story suffering

Four walls peremptorily shouted back the round’s thunderous crack. Gaseous and ruthless power drove the round forward with all the gentleness of an angry god, and simultaneously its respective cartridge case swelled, plugging the breech. Propellant followed suit of the primer and erupted. Mechanically, like Rocky Balboa and John Henry in concert, the firing pin

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